Please rate my poem?! It would mean a lot!?

I love it - I could just hear the blues music as the words tumbled through my head. You have plenty of talent. My advice to you would be: Never stop writing! Believe me, from personal experience, it's tough to get started again once you've stopped. Write frequently - every day - any thought that comes to mind, even if it's fragmented. Keep scrap notebooks together so you can find old excerpts that might inspire you. Never erase - it might fit elsewhere. Aculate your poems. I've had the thought of publishing my stuff for a long time - just make sure you have a collection somewhere. Keep reading and writing! :) Good luck!